This is the first short story I have written in, say, six months. I cranked it out in one sitting on a rough idea I've had for quite some time and I'm sorry that I didn't think that this story -- due to it being a rough idea and my first step back into this style of writing -- was really needed editing because it's the first time I'm coming back into it. My idea for writing this were the following: to see if I can write a short story again, get back into writing on a computer (For those that don't know, I only write with hand then transcribe my writing to my computer), and to write stories that I love for others. So, this was a rough writing assignment I forced myself into doing once again the stories I love to write. I promise that after this, I will put more thought and effort into them.
Without further boring notices, my first short story published online, "A Black Day, This"
-T.A. Skirmont
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The Sun began to peek through the pulled curtains. Long
rays pushed through the room right up to Ed’s eyes. A bright light just to wake
him up, the only thing that sounded to wake up.
Ed
sat up gently. Ed tried his best not to rustle the bed. The small body next to
him wouldn’t want to wake up just yet. The day was going to be too long for
her. For him. For all of them.
He
moved quietly out to the seat in the front room. His body was traced by the
vines that traced milky white up and down his entire body. The Sun began to
give colours to the vines: pink, red, blue. Light’s refractions through the
window struck the room with hues of beauty.
The
chair made a screeching sound as Ed twisted it to look out of the window. He
opened the curtains to show the streets. Ed sat down and just looked over the
city. Immaculately clean streets; for years the streets had no trash, no
clutter, no garbage littering the sidewalks. Tall peaks had been forsaken for
the personal, low topped rises which created the personal relation built with
one another again.
Cities
became the impersonal jungle of everyone. This was the first time that any
group of people chose to leave that behind. Ed thought back, Leslie and he had
left. They were sick of these relationships, being part of the faceless horde
which haunted the pavement which inched its way across the green.
A
small cough broke Ed’s thoughts.
Leslie
was there. Her black body was like his pale skin, lined with the sacrifices
they made. Ivy of the tales of freedom which crafted their pleasure for living
covered their bodies, just like everyone else here.
“Is
it today?” Her milky voice floated between them both. The only clothing which
covered each other. She walked over and
sat on his lap, curling up tightly.
“Did
we get anything?” Leslie’s voice was muffled by forcing its way through the
legs.
Ed
shook his head. Thank God, I couldn’t do it again. Not to you. I don’t know
how much more of this I can take.
Leslie
reached up and touched his cheek. She smiled. “It’ll all be okay, we only have
to do this one day a year.”
The
time came. Everyone came, the large naked group stood in the middle of the
street with one another. Brushing up against one another, greetings and
questions into the current status of lives were asked between people.
“Goodness,
did you see the stories on Leila?”
“It
seems that Jackie had her baby, I’m so happy for her.”
“Rugby
later? I’m free right after this, actually.”
The
words floated throughout the crowd and slowly drifted to Ed’s ears. Sound was
off, there were no connects between the words and the meanings. The words
became vacuous in the face of why they were here. Everyone was nervous. Eyes
darted everywhere, people couldn’t stand still. There was no one that wanted to
speak the words which could stop this meeting, a question of why they did this.
BOOM.
The
first sign was sounded.
BOOM.
Doors of the Hall before the crowd opened and four perfect specimens
came out. The only four people of this place without the lines of freedom.
Ethereal skin, soft and without the signs of sacrifice gave these four people
something wrong about their visage. Their long faces came to a pointed end on
their chins. The two females and two males were barely different; the bodies
were hidden behind the only cloth in town. Small rises on the female’s chest
was the only sign of their sex.
BOOM.
The
box came out.
The
small metal cube with the only opening at the top; a small black hole which
held the fate of each member of this city.
The
crowd became quiet as a dead body. The four ethereal faces looked around and
smiled, eyes locked with all those around the people. Ed made eye contact with
one of the females and couldn’t look away from her eyes, even after she broke
the contact. The beauty was disturbing Ed, the beauty of each of the pointed,
thin faces scared him. The faces weren’t right, not human.
Long,
skeletal fingers reached into the box.
The
crowd’s breathing stopped, eyes wouldn’t move away from the hidden hand which
slowly swirled inside of the box.
The
fingers held a small piece of paper. Slowly the fingers unfolded the paper. The
eyes looked at the paper and a wispy voice carried through the silent,
breathless crowd.
“Edward
McGovern.”
Ed breathed
out hard. Leslie squeezed his arm and forced a smile. He moved quietly up to
the ethereal figures standing in front of the Hall. They moved out of the way,
revealing the dark entrance into the Hall. Ed held his breath and moved quickly
into the Hall’s entrance and walked through the long foyer to the small wooden
door at the other side.
Ed
took slow, long steps towards the door. The white and pink tiled floor echoed
in the domed ceiling. The arches which came down to create a semi-corridor which
brought Ed to the wooden door, the symbols were etched into the wood. Deeply
carved symbols, symbols that Ed had only seen here. The rest of the town was
kept up tight; this was the only way into the city from below. No sewer
openings, no rain drains throughout the city, no underbelly.
Except
for this.
Ed
opened the door slowly, air rushed out. A stale, wet air that smelt of the
stink below.
Each
step was slow into the gathering darkness.
Lower.
Lower.
Lower.
Ed
reached the bottom of the stairs. The damp smell and humid air was heaviest. A
light brought Ed to his senses, a bright blue light in the middle of the dark.
His slow steps brought him to the light.
The
pale blue light revealed a small, circular room. Bare stone walls had only one
ornament. A small white knife barely four inches long. The knife shone bright
as a star in the blue light, radiated the sacredness of this event. Ed reached
out to it and grabbed the knife, holding the small weight in his left hand.
Slowly
a clanking sound from above became louder as a mass connected to the chain came
down. The formless blob became more distinct as the body was brought closer to
Ed. The black shadow became legs and arms, a naked shivering torso, a head
covered in a black sack. The arms of this woman were pierced through with a
meat hook that had been soddered into her skin from the Four’s unseen, but
heard lackies. Her pale blue skin was unblemished, Ed felt wrong about touching
the body before him as he ran his hands over the unscarred flesh.
He
reached out and removed the bag to reveal the face of a girl that would not
even be out of high school, would never be out of high school. Her face was
still like a pixie, still round, fleshy and pink. Her eyes, the drugged eyes,
were bleary as she looked at him.
“Clark
Kent? What are you-” her sentence died as she fell deeper into her drugged
stupor. She slumped, suspended by the hook through her forearms.
“By
the hands of the last born, for the mouth of the Elders, this is the generation
to live,” Ed sliced his right palm with the knife and dripped blood into the
centre of the circle, “by the sacrifice of the generation mixed.”
The
girl’s soft skin gave no resistance as he pulled the small knife across her
throat.
The
ground opened in a gaping mouth. The darkness pushed Ed back to the stairs and
he ran through the entrance hall into the street.
The
Four were gone, but the crowd had stayed around him. Ed was breathing hard, the
sprint had taken everything out of him, and the Darkness had taken the life of
the last one that had looked into it. The eight arms had almost gotten him as
he ran.
As
he stood in front of everyone, he caught his breath with everyone else. They
all stood in anticipation for what would happen now.
Minutes
seemed like hours as they waited.
Four
figures slowly came out. The ethereal smile on each of their faces hid their
teeth.
“The
sacrifice has been completed and accepted. You may now leave.”
The
Four turned and the girl closest to Ed smiled at him.
The
teeth were red.
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